In the advanced of technology, it is easier to get information online. Now, the number of people who finds news from internet in higher than before. However, the existence of newspaper for a large number of people will remain as the top source of news by considering the accurate information given and the easiness to red.
As a conventional source of news and providing news since long time ago, newspaper is a kind of trusted sources of information in many people views. The information given there must be updated and accurate. To keep the reputation of newspaper, its company obviously make check and recheck before it is printed and distributed to society. Compared to online, there are so many related news to be found with different opinions or perspectives of the reporters. Many news from internet are not accurate since now many online news companies open space for anyone to write any information they know without doing check and recheck to what they write. Consequently, abundance news with many difference perspectives are found in internet make the news becoming ambiguity that confuse reader. Therefore, although there will be more people read news from internet, they will refer then to newspaper to find clear and accurate information.
In addition, newspaper in its Colom provides information based on specific field in which they will divided each aspect for instance law, social politics, science and business to different pages of the newspaper. So, it will be easy to read for any purpose, for example when people want to read about politics they will directly refer to a certain page and find some information about politics. However, in internet people also can specifically find information about politics only by typing the keyword, but sometimes internet provide too much news, and reader should open one by one to find the specific one they want to read, so, it is definitely time consuming.
In conclusion, even though there will be increasing number of people read news from internet, but because there is too much information with variety views, it makes reader confuse. consequently, reader will turn to the newspaper to find accurate, update news which is also easy to read. Therefore, newspaper will stay as the most pivotal resource of news.
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- In many developed countries life expectancy is rising while birthrates are falling As a result the elderly will make up a much larger proportion of the population in future Is this a positive or negative development 72
- Some people believe that children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe that children should be free to do what they want to do their free time What s your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exam 80
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 87
- 7 Although more and more people read news on the internet newspapers will remain the most important source of news Do you agree or disagree 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...However, the existence of newspaper for a large number of people will remain as the top source of...
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Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much related news', 'a good deal of related news'.
Suggestion: much related news; a good deal of related news
...ciety. Compared to online, there are so many related news to be found with different opinions or ...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: Much; Little
...nions or perspectives of the reporters. Many news from internet are not accurate sin...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: Much news; A good deal of news
...nions or perspectives of the reporters. Many news from internet are not accurate since no...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'divide'
Suggestion: divide
...ed on specific field in which they will divided each aspect for instance law, social po...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...variety views, it makes reader confuse. consequently, reader will turn to the newspaper to f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08266666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71849631639 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6228959322 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357589759539 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133521053011 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976709710542 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237430854041 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068621030552 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.