Being successful in sports has always been argued that physical strength outweighs mental strength, while some people said otherwise. However, in my opinion both are equally necessary to reach exercise goal.
To be part of sport activities, player is required with good health condition, fit physically, and good endurance history in which all of those are kind of physical strength. Athletes who play in a competition are those who are tricky selected by their performance during exercise. They will be assessed mostly based on their physical strength such as how long and how fast they can run, jump, swim related to kind of sports they play, how long they can stay in the arena without break and drink and how strong their body when getting injures or hit. Player with weak body condition will be kicked out or will not be put in competition. Therefore, to be chosen playing in competition, athletes spend most of their time regularly by working out to fit and to increase the stamina of their body and strengthen their muscles.
However, Mental strength is necessarily needed to be successful in sports. Each athlete has to be prepared to have mental strength before they are put in a race. In the race arena, there will be found sportsmen with variety in body structures such as, tall, short, big, skinny, and fat. So, when a short player faces a tall player and they are not prepared mentally, they might be down in spiritual and possibly give up before competing. Sportsmen also have to be ready with supporters’ judgement, for instance, many supporters call the player by judging them physically, or call them problem maker, or loser. The players who are unprepared mentally facing these kinds of judgements will get depression and the worst will get mental disorder. Therefore, spiritual strength is really essential affecting to be successful in sports.
In conclusion, both physical strength and mental strength are very essential in winning a sport competition as player is required to be strong physically and well endurance and also should be ready mentally to face variety perspectives or judgement in arena competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 663, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
...in competition. Therefore, to be chosen playing in competition, athletes spend most of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, really, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07627118644 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69581082846 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5073617997 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170493704382 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074468546016 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888525958107 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159658324553 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101759747414 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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