A person earning much money is mostly described as a successful man. I partly agree to this statement as the ability to more money needs hard work and intelligence. while success is not always about money but also about principle of life.
When people can buy anything what they want and pay their bills, they get satisfaction and happiness in their life. Many people cannot afford to pay their bills andthen feeling as a loser. Having a big house, luxurious car, frequent travelling and buying wanted stuff are dreams of most people. To bring these dreams come true to the real life, creating more and more money is the key. Therefore, many people are working hard and thinking hard to create money. so, when they are able to earn much money and make their dreams come true, then they feel that they are success in life.
However, many people also describe that success is not always about money, but it is about principle of life. Some people do not want to multiply money for themselves, even if they have a chance. for example spme person choose to work in charity organization , while they have opporrtunity to work in multinational company with a high rates of salary. They prefer to put themselves in helping helpless people who need them and try to create a happines and positive sight on those people. For people like them,, helping people emotionally and mentally to be confident and optimistic mind is a great achievement. This achievement, thay call success.
In conclusion, earning a sum of money is kind of success, as only with money people can buy anything they want. Otherwise, having little money but loved and meaningful to many people can be called success as well as it gives satisfaction in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: While
...money needs hard work and intelligence. while success is not always about money but a...
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Suggestion: So
...hard and thinking hard to create money. so, when they are able to earn much money ...
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...ht on those people. For people like them,, helping people emotionally and mentally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80201342282 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49926556029 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1052261089 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1764705882 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180071139621 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069415724142 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605670979285 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137479645734 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584899468884 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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