9. Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behaviour. discuss both views and give opinion.
Children are always engaged in television for leisure in recent times. Some may agree that the length of time spent watching television influences their conduct. However, I believe that it is the content that significantly impacts their behaviour.
Proponents may argue that the length of watching television causes children to be predominantly glued to their programmes which markedly affects their eyesight in the long run. Moreover, there has been studies shown how snacking junk food when watching television have increased over time which indirectly poses serious health risks such as obesity and type 2 diabetes. Apart from the health risks, long television time affects their developmental growth as their creativity skills such as reading, drawing and playing outside becomes restricted.
Having said that, the content in a television programme plays a pivotal role when commercials advertise processed food or toys which encourages kids to ask for them impulsively. In addition, cartoons portray aggressive characters involved in murders, violent fights or shoplifting which may predominantly affect a kid’s personality as they may question their way of morality. For example, a TV show called 13 Reasons Why, glorified suicide as a story. Though it was widely discussed, many have debated about how children may view it wrongly. Hence, this proves that the content shown in television is more detrimental to the children than the length.
In brief, it is evident that the content viewed on television has to be carefully monitored by parents so that the children are able to enjoy it without being affected by them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'agrees'.
Suggestion: agrees
...n for leisure in recent times. Some may agree that the length of time spent watching ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, apart from, as to, for example, in addition, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41960784314 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82260333397 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4493989403 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307948735944 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118803370758 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103056439752 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205901932752 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140882086463 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.