Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Overpopulation causes many municipal problems like high traffic congestion and air pollution. To solve these problems, governments provide incentives to motivate people to relocate to rural areas. One way to encourage people to live in these areas is to provide employment by relocating industries to the less-developed areas. movement of organizations may have few downsides but I believe that the advantages of this scenario are more significant.
To begin with, it is absurd to say that movement of industry sectors from major cities to the countryside could easily be done without suffering any losses. In order to move industries to less-developed areas, government and companies will have to cope with many challenges. Firstly, regional areas have low security, inappropriate infrastructures, lack of transportation, and scarcity of communication channels. So governments have to spend huge money to set up these means before starting a business there. Secondly, the change in the term of postion could reduce the quality of the workforces because many people may prefer to stay in metropolises to maintain their living standards.
However, I would argue that the advantages of this scenario are more important. Industries always produce emissions. Since the population of big cities is too high the pollutions put the health of many people at risk. Many people decide to move to major cities to find a good work position. The increased number of people who migrate to major cities could lead to many problems, including the lack of affordable housing, the formation and expansion of slums, burdening the education and healthcare systems. However, the movement of industries could provide job opportunities and reduce urban migration problems to a great extent.
In coclustion, despite of few negative points, movement of industry areas to the rural areas have more important advantages that could metigat many problems we are already faced in metropolis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Movement
...industries to the less-developed areas. movement of organizations may have few downsides...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t. Industries always produce emissions. Since the population of big cities is too hig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46885245902 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09967705577 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8775678235 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206318330028 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627355596133 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442233212744 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133634383475 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370149136738 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.