In a modernizing word, due to the population movement toward cities, the overloading issue of metropolitants is now concerned. To adapt with this problem, companies are encouraged to relocate the works to rural regions. In this case, the benefits is raise above the adverse impacts in many fields, especially in the accommodation and region internal travelling conundrum.
Expand the business to the country side may had the overall positive impacts in some aspect of civilizations. At the transportation point of view, changing the business location to rural area helps with reduce the traffic density in the large cities. As a result, the traffic congestion will be balanced around urban and the surrounded area. In a traffic decreased residential area, people will have the ability of having their private vehicles, this create a desired effect to social distancing when facing a transmitting diseases problem.
At the rental point of view, the relocation of the companies out of major cities will create many expected fluences. With the business moving to the lower density area, the occupancies will earn the benefits of lower rental prices while still living nearby of the workplaces. Consequently, the remain surplus of incoming will leverage the living standard as well as community contributions.
In conclusion, moving the business rural regions will have many positive impacts which raised above the undesired influences.
- Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences Others however believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime Discuss both views and give your opinion
- The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 73
- While mobile phones have many advantages a number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which they are used What are some of these problems What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems 78
- Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land What solution is better 78
- The bar chart shows British Emigration selected to destinations between 2004 and 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting and make comparisons where relevant 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nearby of the workplaces. Consequently, the remain surplus of incoming will leverage the l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, may, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.466367713 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94344665655 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582959641256 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0242326372 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.818181818 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223460518224 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764767660274 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575818054544 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127195970267 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237612051858 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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