Accomodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas . Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
In the edge of industrial revolution, the number of businessman and company is steady increasing. That leads to the lack of office for rent or further is the problem in accommodation and transport due to crowded cities. In this situation, businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. I totally agree with it and here are some reasons.
Firstly, when moved to rural areas, businesses will have more chance to find an ideal place for their office. Environment is a key that affect company’s atmosphere. Good air quality, large space and a breathtaking scenery will make their employees work more productive and improve the company’s production.
Secondly, the business can save a lot of money for renting which is much expensive if they are placed in urban. Furthermore, the locality in rural areas have lots of moderate policies to appeal company especially big company to have long-term investment in their native. Beside this, there also have some disadvantages when business moved out the city such as the short of public service, the longer distance when they come to meet their partner. But in my opinion, in The Fourth Industrial Revolution the distance will no longer be the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90407553778 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3720369949 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180153545851 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644129959701 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684124885602 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12267946042 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450583744006 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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