According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world-wide, we should be concern about the effect this is having on social interaction
It is of some individuals opinion that rather than viewing the Internet as a way of creating new means of communication globally, its impact on how people interact socially should be of great concern giving a recent study which revealed that people tend to have less interpersonal relationships when they spend more time on the Internet.In my opinion, overuse of the Internet is a major cause of concern as it has led to poor virtual communication with people around. But, a balance can be reach to prevent it's negative impact.
To begin, one of the major benefit of the Internet is the accessibility to people wherever they are. This means people can easily pass messages across to others in a fast and convenient way. Also, the Internet help to connect people regardless of where they live. This means families are well connected that before. For example, I am able to get in touch with my sibling living in the UK by just a click away using a social media platform. They get my message instantly and sometime I can use a video call to actually see them. As a result, Family ties are kept strong and people are well connected.
Although, the ability of the Internet to keep people connected is like a double edge sword. This means when people over indulge in it, they become withdrawn and are less likely to form meaningful human interaction. This is true especially for children, who at a tender age begin to use the Internet. For instance, a recent study showed that children who spend over 4 hours a day on the web are likely to develop one or more mental health problems. Consequently, people tend to be less sensitive and suffer from more mental issues.
To sum up, communication using the Internet has been amazingly useful to humans. However, a balance should be maintained to keep a healthy social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73270440252 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66671302025 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.9425607604 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367709362436 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10340145601 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786972120375 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215219413789 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610614193626 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.