According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world wide, we should be concer

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... reliable information instantly and more right than the information by human bein...
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...le information instantly and more right than the information by human beings.As...
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...ht than the information by human beings.As the saying a machine can never make a ...
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...ht than the information by human beings.As the saying a machine can never make a ...
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...As the saying a machine can never make a mistake but a human does defines the peo...
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...saying a machine can never make a mistake but a human does defines the people usi...
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...rnet more consistently. On one hand,People notice that internet has literally chan...
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...ged the communication between two people,For example two persons travel daily in a s...
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...ame bus but never barely know their name as they get so involved in the internet ...
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... but never barely know their name as they get so involved in the internet ei...
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... either by watching movies or games etc.There is no personal interaction betwee...
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...watching movies or games etc.There is no personal interaction between people.Befo...
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...g movies or games etc.There is no personal interaction between people.Before the i...
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... personal interaction between people.Before the internet came into place a family e...
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... personal interaction between people.Before the internet came into place a family e...
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...ternet came into place a family everyday while having dinner shares how the day a...
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...llege was like and have good talk in the family but at present day they barely ta...
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... other and everyone is busy either using the internet either on phone or tablet. ...
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...and everyone is busy either using the internet either on phone or tablet. ...
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... phone or tablet. On the other hand,The communication between people improves y...
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...improves your ability to think and learn rather just getting the information onli...
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...s your ability to think and learn rather just getting the information online.Lik...
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...s your ability to think and learn rather just getting the information online.Lik...
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...her just getting the information online.Like for example,if a student is weak in mat...
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... the information online.Like for example,if a student is weak in maths he sea...
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...example,if a student is weak in maths he searches online to improve his skill but...
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...his skill but still fails instead if he get a proper personal guidance by any...
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...ails instead if he get a proper personal guidance by any teacher he would underst...
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...stead if he get a proper personal guidance by any teacher he would understand it m...
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...her he would understand it more clearly.Social interaction helps you communicate and g...
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...tion with individuals more realisticaly.Though you connect through people across the c...
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... lack in the first place. To sum up,People should realize and try to change the ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, while, for example, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3838028169 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88854963678 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.237277723 49.4020404114 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 382.25 106.682146367 358% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 20.7667163134 342% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.75 7.06120827912 336% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306612984293 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215725971829 0.084324248473 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883131045505 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10487787545 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918306292996 0.056905535591 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 13.0946893788 301% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 50.2224549098 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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