Action movies with spectacular car chases are very popular with young people. It is often said that these sorts of movies lead to an increase in car accidents among young drivers as they try to copy what they have seen in films . Do you agree that such movies increase the amount of bad driving ? What can be done to encourage young people to drive more safely?
Undoubtedly, entertainment is the source for populace to reduce their stress and forget their worries for sometime. Moreover, others watch the cinema for their favorite celebrity and they like their style, acting and so on. While, at some extent they are following them and make theirself to look like them. So, it is not good thing to imitate others because in films all the prospects are added that are suitable and some are not. I intend to discuss my both views in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, mostly youngsters are influenced by the action movies because they prefer to see that kind of movies. So, they apply that actions in their real life because they are immature they did not know about the consequences. Whereas, when they drive safely then sometimes they injured and public also face accident due to their bad driving. For instance, when young people bet on racing and drive with high speed and along with this they do some actions they face problems.
On the other hand, if teachers, parents and government should take strict actions on them then number of accidents should decrease. First and foremost, parents should not allow their small children to drive any vehicle because in these days almost all young folks start driving in their 14 or 16 age. Moreover, teacher might organise seminars based on traffic rules. Like, if they these things are included in their academic study then they can learn it easily. Furthetmore, legislation also finre panelity on them that are driving without licenses
In conclusion, I wonder that if in movies the action play then they should make announcement about their bad result before the action movie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worries about'?
Suggestion: worries about
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... teachers, parents and government should take strict actions on them then number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35107172696 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1659781264 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199424431935 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072890345872 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065666124697 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132275199105 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808518227644 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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