A healthy spirit is believed to require a healthy bode but nowadays most of adults are not care about their body and do not exercise regularly. While some people believe that athletic events like Olympics which can motivate people to do more exercise have a main role on their willing, others think different. Seldom, do these events affect on people’s motivation and there should be superior measures is their idea.
It is true that, big events like world cup and Olympic have large effect on individuals’ enthusiasm encouraging them to sport for a period of time. To be precise, people have this chance to participate in these kind of events having been held each four years and at the same time, individuals become more enthusiasm to mobility. For instance, in Russia 2018 Olympic some athletic groups had been formed to perform volunteer matches as a favorite team supportive; at that time lots of mature generation joined those groups.
Although create motivation is not impossible by world events, adults need a permanent provocative to consider sport as a requisite aspect of their life and do it regularly. When individuals become older they face some changes on their bodies that may not be aware about them like some cardiovascular problems and increasing blood pressure and fat. TV can be a good example to inform people about the problems having faced in different ages in addition, encourage them to do some especial exercise to reach longevity.
In conclusion, undoubtedly big athletic events are a good way to increase personal willing to sport but, I firmly believe inform people about benefits of sport all the time could be more effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the adults') or simply say ''most adults''.
Suggestion: most of the adults; most adults
... to require a healthy bode but nowadays most of adults are not care about their body and do no...
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Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Seldom' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... their willing, others think different. Seldom, do these events affect on people'...
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Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...hink different. Seldom, do these events affect on people's motivation and there shou...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...husiasm encouraging them to sport for a period of time. To be precise, people have this chance...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ople have this chance to participate in these kind of events having been held each four ye...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mature generation joined those groups. Although create motivation is not imposs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74964195412 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 23.9551664574 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 140.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276992067522 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111548126279 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529456963701 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158987141008 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505219694233 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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