Nowadays, university qualification is not accessible for all individuals at ease; although reach to this situation is not easy specially for poor and rural families, some measures should be considered by universities to provide better circumstances for these families to apply and earn a degree. I completely agree with this assertion to some extent, and my reasons are as follows.
Over this recent years, universities receive exorbitant budget from students wanting apply for a major, however this tuition fee is not affordable for many people and poor families could be a good example of this issue. Most of these people have an occupation which is not lucrative job most of the time, owing to lack of university qualification; thus, if those astronomical tuition fee had not existed, now poor families would be able to study and have a prestigious job in equality with affluence families.
Moreover, some of these academic institutes have entrance exam to select students and this acceptation is said to be 90% from students with appropriate facilities in their high school like knowledgeable teacher. For instant, these teachers prefer to work at big cities instead of going to deprived cities and rural area so, rural people grow up in unfavorable situation having had inadequate facilities to become prepare for that exam. Universities should consider this issue destroying student’s willing to continue their education and in this situation they should eliminate entrance exam.
In conclusion, I believe that without a university degree working in a well-paid and beneficial job is impossible; hence, universities must provide appropriate condition specially for underprivileged students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50570342205 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10595888315 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2187422763 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.0 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.875 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19881328535 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922417213369 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343859057297 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128599969181 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337140030882 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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