Nowadays, most of adults do not care about their body and do not exercise regularly. While some people believe that athletic events like the Olympics have a main role on people’s desire and can motivate them to do more exercise, others think different. Seldom, do these events affect on people’s motivation and there should be superior measures is their idea.
It is true that, big events like the world cup and the Olympic have huge effects on individuals’ enthusiasm encouraging them to sport for a period of time. To be precise, people have this chance to participate in these kind of events having been held each four years and at the same time, individuals become more enthusiasm to mobility. For instance, in Russia 2018 Olympic some sports groups had been formed to provide free matches to support their favorite team; at that time lots of mature generation joined those groups.
Although create motivation is not impossible by world events, adults need a permanent provocative to consider sport as a primary priority of their life and do it regularly. When individuals become older, they face some changes on their bodies that may not be aware about them like some cardiovascular problems and increase blood pressure and fat. TV can be a good example to inform them about the problems which will have faced at different ages; in addition, encourage them to do some especial exercise to reach longevity.
In conclusion, undoubtedly sporting events are a good way to increase personal desire to sport but, I firmly believe informing people about benefits of sport always could be more effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the adults') or simply say ''most adults''.
Suggestion: most of the adults; most adults
Nowadays, most of adults do not care about their body and do not...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Seldom' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... more exercise, others think different. Seldom, do these events affect on people'...
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Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...hink different. Seldom, do these events affect on people's motivation and there shou...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...husiasm encouraging them to sport for a period of time. To be precise, people have this chance...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ople have this chance to participate in these kind of events having been held each four ye...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mature generation joined those groups. Although create motivation is not imposs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09737827715 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74609745167 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.9520864286 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.1 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281339754583 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114342431082 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512576228121 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165434644322 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529541694208 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.