Over a century, advancement in the field of education, science, artificial intelligence has been increasing rapidly. It is undeniable that the lifestyle has thoroughly been changed. However, is advancement increasing the lifespan of people? No, i believe it is deteriorating the health because of radiations emitted by gadgets and different diseases.
There are several examples of how the technology impacts our daily life. To begin, modern appliances and furnishing in the house is the biggest help for humankind. These products bring the ease and comfort in our day-today life. For instance, women use to spend hours in kitchen to prepare food for the family, however, nowadays it has become a piece of cake for ladies. Not only this, living in a modern house elevates the standard and quality of life. Hence, there is no doubt in saying that society has become more comfortable place to live than in the past.
On the other hand, techological gadgets has several adverse impacts on our health and it decreases the life span of people. Firstly, radiations emitted by mobile phones and their towers is hazardous for our health. As it can not be seen, we do not realise and become a victim. Being in contact with radiations affect our mental ability and deteriorate the power of brain. Secondly, transporation is definitely a good source of commuting and saves our time, but increases the road accidents. For example, over a decade, accidents of highway has been increased by 29% because of increased transportation. Therefore, it is significantly clear that there are negative aspects of growth in the society.
To conclude, although development in society brings enormous amount of benefits for humans, there are few disadvantages which can not be overlooked.
- In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these TV shows and books are popular What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas 92
- Some people believe that if the police force carries guns it would encourage a higher level of violence in the society To what extent do you agree or disagree 76
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Successful companies use advertisement to make more sales What can make an advertisement very effective Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... increasing the lifespan of people? No, i believe it is deteriorating the health ...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...our day-today life. For instance, women use to spend hours in kitchen to prepare fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1958041958 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9287761885 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2626806526 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108242489172 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333709921602 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367440943792 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582268334797 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149264769749 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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