Advantages and disadvantages for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school
Nowdays, it is believed that is surpass for children to commence studying nonnative speech at primary school rather than secondary school. In this essay, I completely agree that more advantages than disadvantages for some considerations they afford utilize the foreign language as mother language since at primary school cause to learn foreign language necessary to study the culture of language and applied daily
In the one hand, the advantages of that is to manufacture child early for memorize what was heard, concept what they were learned, and imitate what they were seen. One significant is at the moment child obtain pervade parlance rapidly. For example my brother who realize english course at one of international elementary school in Jakarta be able speak english in daily dialogue. As result, he has good habit to raise his english language ability with read english novels and playing some games. It is important to improve his self.
On other hand, the disadvantages of the children who starting learning a foreign language at primary school instead of secondary school is frustrating experience for children, cause several parents force their child to dominate foreign language. It is due to their pretension not realistic, that's able to endanger think process and child ability to utilize mother language. For instance excessively child who exceedingly early studying a foreign language in big city disposed trouble with mother language and has social interaction disruption because contradiction culture language. Therefore child not shall play with others child who not converse with their language. It is no doubt that became record an old fellow to teach their child with esteem style. I don't believed that all of parents only aims to gain prestige and force their child to become master foreign language
In my opinion that exemplary for start quickly learning a foreign language, cause it has benefit in great quantities. In conclusion, from where I trusted that more advantages than disadvantages for children who commence studying a foreign language early at elementary school
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'surpassed'.
Suggestion: surpassed
Nowdays, it is believed that is surpass for children to commence studying nonna...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to utilize'
Suggestion: to utilize
...ges for some considerations they afford utilize the foreign language as mother language...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate what they were seen. One significant is at the moment child obtain pervade pa...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... due to their pretension not realistic, thats able to endanger think process and chil...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...because contradiction culture language. Therefore child not shall play with others child ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... teach their child with esteem style. I dont believed that all of parents only aims ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35843373494 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72013634727 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.974482687 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.846153846 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452195453615 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159771327253 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177343795391 0.0667982634062 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329599756318 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183372409759 0.056905535591 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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