Many people believe that social networking sites (such as facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society
Nowadays is believed that social networking places (such as Facebook) posses very bad negative influence on both individual and community. I completely agree there was big disadvantages than advantages for individual and society who used social networking sites.
In the one hand, the advantages of social networking places is to raise income people by online business. It because in modern era business in social networking sites facile was founded by personal and community from various background and age with fantastic profits. For example food delivery business in social networking which initiated by housewife in inner city, promoted by ones of social networking place especially Facebook with consumer employee of big company seize a huge omset in one month. As results business in social media networking succeed empower housewife and increase their income independent woman. It is important made society useful and decreased jobless.
In other hand, the biggest disadvantages for users social networking site was increased crime in among society. It is due to not complicated deceive individual and community with friendship or business relationship. For instance adolescent in senior high school in small regency un Central Java had foul rape experience cause relationship in fame social networking site (Facebook), the sacrifice abduct strange people via Facebook, disappear and discovered in remote place after raped by man. Therefore individual and society harmed, young generation threatened loose future and the society fear live the life. It is no doubt must be considered by consumers social media networking, parents and government for controlling to use part of social media networking as Facebook. I do not believed became productive consumers social media had more benefit, exactly shatter the future. In my opinion there was dangerous risk threaten all generation in society as active social media users in life. In conclusion, from where I stand I agree social media networking had bad influenced present and futurity, impacted personal till community which can not occur avoided handily and require many side for restrain criminal case
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...red in remote place after raped by man. Therefore individual and society harmed, young ge...
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Line 5, column 1178, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun side seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sides'.
Suggestion: many sides
...n not occur avoided handily and require many side for restrain criminal case
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55454545455 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81994894092 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7599232636 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396754254608 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125329117136 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693286457219 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280127940012 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577551553385 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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