It is often argued about advantages and disadvantages of the internet all overall people. In this essay, I would like to describe both effects thoroughly.
As talking about advantages of the internet, Firstly, it helps better communication all over the world. for instance, my brother has lived Australia for many years and we can communicate daily with him, it is only possible through advantage. Secondly, other added advantage is to make education easier. we can search all the universities, their how to apply process, application form and also we can apply our education overseas through the internet. for instance, I have recently applied in RMIT university in my chosen subject that all possible with the internet.
Lastly but not the least advantage is the availability of internet online courses, the people like us who have a tight schedule of work can extract some time and have their further studies easier way.
Now going through disadvantages, it has serious issues in the case of nudity. many people are the victim of blackmailing by others in the matter of sex and nudity spreading through the internet. Another most striking disadvantage I would like to talk about is the internet hackers. it leads to the loss and stealing of important and secret data from their computers. To illustrate I want to talk about one recently happened event in NIC Asia bank, Nepal, where an Indian boy steals more than one crore rupees through bank hacking.
In my opinion internet have both effects on people, what to choose either good or bad side of this depends on peoples perspective towards internet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, for instance, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02247191011 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72179786001 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3254344657 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315626624491 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112403453165 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122654204906 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177091553271 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693430562627 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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