Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives

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Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives

Submitted by Tanu123 on Thu, 02/13/2020 - 07:17

Nowadays mobile phones become a part of everyone's life. From a little kid to old people every one using mobile phones. Let's see the advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones in detail.
Using mobile phones has so many benefits like making bank payments, transferring money to others in a fraction of seconds by not going to banks . Mobile phones have decreased the cost of living of human beings in many ways. Furthermore, mobiles replaced the usage of calendars, greeting cards and reduced the wastage of paper. Additionally, mobiles reduced the workload by making human work more easier. Also, mobiles can be used to book hospital appointments, booking movie tickets, ordering food without going out from home. Moreover, mobiles help in gaining knowledge and enhancing technological skills. In addition to all the other, mobiles made the world into one village and pave the way to communicate the people around the world.
Mobiles increased the distance between people. It also made people lazy by making work easier. Everyone addicted to mobiles and playing games which made children losing interest in playing outdoor games. In many ways, it increased health problems to mankind.Many people addicted to social networking sites .The Radio waves emmiting from the mobiles affects the people at great extent.
To Summarise using mobile phones have more advantages than the disadvantages ,so people have to use mobiles carefully by without addicting to it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...d people every one using mobile phones. Lets see the advantages and disadvantages of...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...raction of seconds by not going to banks . Mobile phones have decreased the cost o...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...duced the workload by making human work more easier. Also, mobiles can be used to book hosp...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
...it increased health problems to mankind.Many people addicted to social networking si...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ople addicted to social networking sites .The Radio waves emmiting from the mobile...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...le addicted to social networking sites .The Radio waves emmiting from the mobiles a...
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e more advantages than the disadvantages ,so people have to use mobiles carefully ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30472103004 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63167375863 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600858369099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2373971274 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288701717892 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110101038241 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959417943677 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203833411504 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845663405497 0.056905535591 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...d people every one using mobile phones. Lets see the advantages and disadvantages of...
^^^^
Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...raction of seconds by not going to banks . Mobile phones have decreased the cost o...
^^
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...duced the workload by making human work more easier. Also, mobiles can be used to book hosp...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Many
...it increased health problems to mankind.Many people addicted to social networking si...
^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ople addicted to social networking sites .The Radio waves emmiting from the mobile...
^^
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...le addicted to social networking sites .The Radio waves emmiting from the mobiles a...
^^^
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e more advantages than the disadvantages ,so people have to use mobiles carefully ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30472103004 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63167375863 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600858369099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2373971274 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288701717892 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110101038241 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959417943677 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203833411504 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845663405497 0.056905535591 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.