Advantages and disadvantages of playing sports
In recent years, almost everyone has been busy with daily work, they ignore playing sports, and even consider playing sports unnecessarily. However, there are still people who play sports because of their many benefits to their health.
Playing sports brings a lot of benefits to our health. You can play the sports you love. These forms of exercise help you improve your overall health, such as reducing stress, making muscles stronger and stronger, improving breathing, etc. On the other hand, you can find new friends through playing team sports. In addition, this will help you become more confident and able to learn how to lead people.
However, playing sports still has some limitations. Playing sports can lead to serious injury if you don't have a coach to assist. Besides, playing sports can be exhausting, you can give up quite soon if you practice many times but still can't do it. Furthermore, success in sports may depend on individual talent.
In short, playing sports can help us have better health and create new relationships. On the contrary, it brings disadvantages such as causing injury and making it easy to give up your passion for playing sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
...unnecessarily. However, there are still people who play sports because of their many b...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ports can lead to serious injury if you dont have a coach to assist. Besides, playin...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...on if you practice many times but still cant do it. Furthermore, success in sports m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, in addition, in short, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02564102564 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4692507388 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4185858695 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3846153846 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340614541338 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147417500275 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796512513902 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228362818756 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419291174917 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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