The advantages and disadvantages of technology on family relationship.
There are several benefits that technology is bringing to the relationships among family members. First and foremost, it connects people together. For example, people can keep in touch with their relatives, their parents or siblings, especially those who are living or working far away, by talking and seeing them through video calls.Thanks to technology, people can communicate with each other wherever they are. Second, the inventions of household appliances based on advanced technology such as dishwasher, washing machine….help people save time on the housework as well as having more time to be with their families. Therefore , they could strengthen the bond among family members. For these reasons, it’s clear that technology has a positive influence on family relationships.
Nevertheless, technology has a few drawbacks. The first one is that both adults and teenagers are spending too much time on their smartphones and other electronic devices, which leads to the lack of face-to-face interaction among people. As a result, each person is gradually becoming isolated in real life. Another negative aspect is that modern technology is ruining families’ time together. The more time people spend on technology, the higher likelihood the conflict exists. This can cause the decrease in the feelings of family closeness. It’s important that people make use of technology effectively so that it could not affect the relationships in family.
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- Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends This has a negative effect on their social lives To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fea 78
- Many people put their personal information online address telephone number and so on for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking Is this a positive or negative development 78
- In many countries today people in cities either live alone or in small family units rather than in large extended family groups Is this a positive or negative trend 78
- In some countries more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Write a paragraph about the advantages and disadvantages of this situation 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56756756757 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01542749742 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626126126126 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.675011234 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0769230769 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208220243011 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914691079525 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944001525993 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172110053908 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00553388682132 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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