Advertisement are becoming more and more common in this life.
Is it positive or negative development?
It is generally known that advertising is one of bussiness part in our life. Almost all products in markets make their own ads to attract many people. Some people think that this development in bussiness sector is beneficial, while others argue that this is negative. I personally believe that the development of advertisement will bring positive impacts to broader societies.
First, advertisement in modern era will open more job vacancies by hiring more people, especially young people. Advertising, nowadays, can be done by several ways, such as promoting products on Youtube or social media. In order to conduct this new form ads, bussinesspeople need youg people that are expert on digital marketing, graphic design, and content creator. These professions are highly demanded because they can deliver the mesaage of advertisement suitable with millenials era.
Another thing to consider is that adversiting plays an important role to build a good reputation of products. Bussiness people make an ads as much interesting as they can because they want to build image of the products and consequently influence more costumers. By gaining many consumers, an industry will get trust in society. In addition, the industries will be encouraged to be more creative every time. They will conduct survey before making ads to know what kind of products people want to. Finally, bussiness people will give the answer of public demand and allow them to earn more money.
In conclusion, this development of advertisement is considered as a positive improvement due to the increase of job opportunities. This enhancement is also fruitfull to industries to build their image as good as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an ad' or simply 'ads'?
Suggestion: an ad; ads
...tion of products. Bussiness people make an ads as much interesting as they can because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, so, while, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30970149254 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99502771648 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6226997657 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245940520758 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750338175693 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702789724585 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153338573259 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433107849839 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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