Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no denying that advertising is an integral part of our modern life, and some people believe that this is a positive situation. However, I somewhat disagree with this viewpoint because the detrimental effects of advertising on individuals and society as a whole outweigh its merits.
On the financial plan, the ubiquity of advertisements is unfavorable for individuals. People are often swayed easily by enticing videos promoting new products, thus being prone to stock up unnecessary things. As a result, the majority of consumers, who are not adept at managing their budget, would end up squandering all their savings on trivial products. Moreover, the proliferation of advertising campaigns is contributing to a consumer society. In such a society, products with short life cycles are often preferred due to their high turnover rate for manufacturing companies. This would cause unprecedented threats to the environment as most of these single-use products are not biodegradable, therefore gradually turning our world into an enormous landfill.
However, that advertising is now an unavoidable part of people’s life has certain advantages to offer. The most obvious upside is that the gap between manufacturers and consumers has been narrowed. Thanks to the latest developments in the advertising industry, producers no longer struggle to break into a market, and consumers can search for the product of their need almost instantly. Consequently, the total sales of goods are rising rapidly, boosting global economic growth.
In conclusion, although the omnipresence of advertising can stimulate global economic prospects, I am convinced that this development is more negative than positive. This is because this trend is causing unnecessary spending of individuals, as well as posing great dangers to the environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59856630824 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21671758213 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.059701716 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224454712496 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785095957289 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104542705562 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139765403464 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894213709023 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.