Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is obvious that the advertising industry has gained popularity and been familiar in recent years. The appearance of this industry has positive effects on our lives.
On the one hand, several culprits lead to the development and popularity of advertising. Firstly, thanks to advances in technology, electronic device, and wireless technology, as well as the digital revolution, make a huge contribution to the development of the advertisement. People could easily gain access to advertising campaigns by watching televisions, surfing websites, and reading magazines. Secondly, it is clear that the primary purpose of corporations is attracting the attention of customers to their goods. Therefore, these companies would spend a significant amount of money on advertising their products, which makes these advertisements appear around their potential customers, as much as possible.
On the other hand, the popularity of advertising also brings a great number of benefits. Firstly, these advertisements play an important role in helping messages or products gain concern and attraction from people. For instance, thanks to good marketing strategies, Grab company successfully breaks into the market in Viet Nam. By investing a significant amount of money in advertising, this corporation could affect the thoughts and habits of customers, persuading them to use its services. Secondly, advertisements not only bring benefits to companies but also help people's lives become more convenient. With a variety of advertisements for products, customers could compare the quality, the prices between goods to choose the most suitable one for their families.
In conclusion, the advent of advertisements has become popular, which brings benefits and convenience for both companies and customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77358490566 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2441726929 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3921386442 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141975558278 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510336211763 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422140279089 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921770734623 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254375277235 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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