Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
While several people these days, including me, support the idea that free time should be used for mental exercises including reading or solving riddles, there are numerous others found using these leisure time to ease their tension a much advantageous choice for each individual.
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for spending the recreational hours for analysing books or solving word puzzles in order to boost one's way of thinking. One fundamental benefit of these activities is that they offer people a unique opportunity to learn and to complete themselves. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that knowledge accomplished from books is extremely valuable for people regardless of the segment of society they came from. Nevertheless, nowadays, the demanding work schedules and curriculum do not allow modern citizens to have times for reading or solving puzzles, thereby, taking advantage of the break for these habits is significantly essential. Another beneficial impact that is worth considering is that mind-improving activities may fulfil people with a sense of achievement. By the way of exemplifying, after finishing reading a whole book or successfully solving a difficult puzzle, people are usually immersed in the joy of victory as well as the satisfaction of broadening their horizons.
Notwithstanding, one can also claim that these valuable free time should be utilized with the purpose of resting the brain. The first and foremost explanation is that our nerve system tends to behave much more effectively after an appropriate resting period. Since the maximum concentrated ability of human beings is just around 20 minutes according to several scientific research, spending free time for relaxing and revitalizing should be the prerequisite so that they can utterly strive for work thereafter. Furthermore, there may some argument that mind-developing activities in free time are not efficient or even a waste of time and they overload the brains, which result in frequent headache and other relevant psychological illnesses.
In conclusion, although using free time for the relaxing purpose may boost work productivity thereafter, spending these time of mind-improving activities still have more useful since it fulfils people with the sense of achievement as well as a scarce chance to learn through books
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... solving word puzzles in order to boost ones way of thinking. One fundamental benefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44657534247 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07596448541 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0722617 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4166666667 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320914995935 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10977259358 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645500172602 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200617970832 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265283471731 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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