Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is this a positive or negative development?
Advertising is a rising form of promotion in everyday life as it profits numerous brands or celebrities. In my opinion, the commonness of advertising is generally positive in different ways, despite the disadvantages.
Firstly, advertising helps brands or companies increase sales through different ways to promote products and services to users. Various advertising techniques can convince customers to trust a specific brand for its products or services with persuading advantages, which could effectively boost sales for labels. For example, Apple uses an advertising technique to convince people that its models will soon run out to increase sales.
Secondly, advertising is helpful for users to find the right products as one of its main roles is to bring suitable products to potential customers. According to the findings, 34% of consumers in the US said they had found their needed product after seeing an advertisement on TV and the Internet.
Moreover, advertising can boost a brand's reputation to strengthen and widen brand loyalty. As reputation contributes crucially to sales and customer loyalty, many brands utilize many ways of advertising to increase fame and trust. For instance, using brand ambassadors to advertise a product not only helps boost the promoter's fame but also increases the brand identity and media engagement. Brands could also establish loyalty in many customers as their ambassadors could prove the products' quality and efficiency through their reputation.
In conclusion, advertising is a shortcut for customers who are in search of their needed products. Likewise, it is an effective marketing strategy for brands to increase sales, credit and loyalty. Thus, I believe advertising is a positive development in today's life.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brands'' or 'brand's'?
Suggestion: brands'; brand's
...t. Moreover, advertising can boost a brands reputation to strengthen and widen bran...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'promoters'' or 'promoter's'?
Suggestion: promoters'; promoter's
...tise a product not only helps boost the promoters fame but also increases the brand ident...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...rs as their ambassadors could prove the products quality and efficiency through their re...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57037037037 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04501211253 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.471800279 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128240773424 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646833301977 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729752130102 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991476454716 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716429280536 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brands'' or 'brand's'?
Suggestion: brands'; brand's
...t. Moreover, advertising can boost a brands reputation to strengthen and widen bran...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'promoters'' or 'promoter's'?
Suggestion: promoters'; promoter's
...tise a product not only helps boost the promoters fame but also increases the brand ident...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...rs as their ambassadors could prove the products quality and efficiency through their re...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57037037037 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04501211253 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.471800279 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128240773424 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646833301977 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729752130102 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991476454716 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716429280536 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.