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Advertising discourage us from being different individuals makes us look the same. Do you agree?
In today’s complex commercial worlds, consumers are increasingly relying on the marketing promotions. Therefore, it has been argued that advertising makes people become less distinctive. From my perspective, I am agree with this statement
Firstly, it is human nature to pursue the latest trend of the society. This is especially true in this day and age, where the cut-throat competition leaves little room for customers to make a rational choice for purchasing. Therefore, one way to gain the latest products and service is to follow the advertising. For example, half of the mobile-phone users...
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Sentence: They are excessively relying on social media to fulfil their vanity.
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Avg. Sentence Length: 15.111 21.0
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.009 0.07 //it means your minds are jumping in the process of essay writing.
You have a good language, but you couldn't get good marks, think why?
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
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No. of Words: 272 350
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No. of Different Words: 177 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.061 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.419 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.806 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
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Avg. Sentence Length: 15.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.353 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.448 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.009 0.07
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