Advertising discourages people from being different by making them want to be and to look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
Answer
There has been a belief that people these days have very similar appearances due to the far-reaching influence of advertising. Whilst there is a grain of truth in this notion, I opine that advertising is not the only factor and people do not always look the same.
On the one hand, people’s outward appearance is, to some extent, affected by what they see. In other words, many people have a propensity to imitate the dressing styles opted by their friends, or more of the case by their idols, primarily through the medium of movies. In fact, movies are one of the most powerful means of advertising a product. For example, Vietnamese young girls tend to buy clothes of the same styles worn by their idols from Korean TV drama series. Another trend now is boys in Vietnam tend to have their hair done with the Korean style.
However, advertising is not the sole contributor to making people desire to look like others. Among them is the need to integrate with other members of the community. It is undeniable that so strong is this sense of belonging that it can immensely distress people if they do not attain this. Take teenagers for example. There are many cases of schoolchildren being singled out by their peers for not affording to look like others. This can be hurtful and traumatic for those youngsters, especially at such an impressionable age.
Having said that, people do not always make the same choices. It is a fact they nowadays many companies have emerged and they provide different lines of goods of the same function. With this variety of choices, people certainly look more diverse. Besides, even when exposed to the same advertisements, for example, ads of a new T-shirt for summer, the chances are that buyers will make a different color choice and combine it with various accessories or other pieces of clothing, which will certainly distinguish them from others.
To conclude, the impacts of advertising on people’s looks are noticeable, but it does not necessarily mean that all people would have identical appearances owing to such an influence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, so, for example, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90651558074 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68493974676 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56657223796 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8375343914 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255250314779 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765495459916 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562647890527 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139053845281 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468325844402 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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