Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that people of modern era follows the trend from advertisements. Some people opine that advertisements destroy the individual’s sense of identity and make them all same by look-wise. I disagree with the given statement.
To begin with, When any new advertisement of new product then people start rushing towards to buy that product and it shows that all individuals doing same. However, after some time they understand that it is a just waste of time and money to spend on the product which is not really appropriate for them. Hence, adverts cannot attract individuals permanently.
In addition, all people are not able to afford all things which showed in ads. Many industries use famous celebrities for their product’s advertisement and people want to buy those products, even then they think about their budget. For instance, when it comes to luxury items, only a marginal number of purchasers can afford its price and purchase it. So, it is not necessary that the product is really attractive then everyone goes to buy that item. Not every people can compromise their budget for some unnecessary or luxury items.
Furthermore, when we talk about the latest fashion, not everyone try the same trend, since people know that which kind of clothes will suits on them and not follow the same fashion. People of nowadays believes to wear comfortable clothes for their daily routine.
In conclusion, advertisements cannot influence all the people to follow one trend, everyone have different choices and requirements. If people starts follow one trend then it will not for a long time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...hich showed in ads. Many industries use famous celebrities for their product’s advertisement and p...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
...le know that which kind of clothes will suits on them and not follow the same fashion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, really, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09848484848 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79408893309 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8699835522 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247358647433 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805882967774 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794650807156 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146482853483 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745319433551 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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