Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, advertisement is a ubiquitous everywhere. Although, people are getting encouraged through advert, sometime the result has shown reverse. A recent decade are witness of development in commercial sector. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. In order to this phenomenon, there has been extensive advantages of marketing outweigh the drawback. This factor distracts the people from doing some unique invention and make them to follow their idols. I will try to throw light upon both impact of advert. Also, I will try to posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious reason to shore those people who are in favor of detrimental impact of advertisement. First and foremost, people who have seen advertisement on television related to food. They have started to consume that food as soon as possible because in that they encouraged people to try this food and make themselves energetic and look like Superman. Another predominant reason is that small enterprises tend not to be able to compete giant market leaders due to their disadvantage of capital poured into advertising programs. Thus, people are attracted by that foreign product and brought it for daily use instead of local brand. Hence, these products become vanished due to people are stranded from that product.
On the other side of spectrum, there are many positive outcome of advert among people. Firstly, profession take aid of this medium to aware the people about local brand product as well as it's usage. So, people are getting influenced from its consequences that would be environmental friendly. In terms of merit of marketing, young generation are feasible to follow the trend that are exposed by their role model. People are influenced by that product which has been promoted by celebrities. Thereby, the products has been used by vast amount user which lead to boost the economy of business as well as country.
Aggelomerating, all the point I elaborated an above, it can be concluded that plethora of affirmative result of advertisement in occupation for gaining knowledge of technology as well as trend. Reversely, people are discouraged by this medium to try different customs. That is why, I support those people who are in favor of advertisement has been played pivotal role among people's lifestyle. Hence, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'outcomes'?
Suggestion: outcomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, thus, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20413436693 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88065835355 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4165536875 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9166666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186657810919 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470110103052 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473997117783 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114546926491 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371210774082 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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