Advertising has become an inevitable part of our lives. Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is true that advertising has become a vital part of our daily life in recent years. While I understand that critics may argue that people still exist without commercials, I hold the belief that there are more advantages than disadvantages
On the one hand, the businesses use glamorous, successful people in advertising to manipulate people to buy the products. For example, the advertisement about cake on television which is colorful and appetizing can sway the children to insist on buying this goods. Moreover, we are easily persuaded to follow the latest trend. A good example could be a smart phone, people can queue for many hours to own the newest phone even when they already have a perfectly good phone that does not need replacing.
On the other hand, I would think that the benefit of advertising existence dominate the drawbacks. Today advertising is a key part of modern business and modern art. For instances, advertisements have more styles not only the pictures in the magazines but it also in the songs or the short movies so the customer can easily remember the goods because they will watch this video many times or they want to use the same material like their idols . Besides, without advertising, there would be higher unemployment. Thanks to, the advertisements on the newspaper or on the wall, people can know more information about this profession and the searching is not had time - consuming. Furthermore, people love adverts therefore advertising is a creative industry that employs many people who love art and imagination.
In conclusion I suppose that the bright side of advertising do outweigh the others.Personally I would lean toward the former opinion, but I think that governments should censor the information and quality of the product before publish to make sure whether this is suitable to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09539473684 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92885035146 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.5016413978 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143600695232 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534139355951 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499096476264 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902399012783 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540520742468 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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