COMPUTER
computers have become a redoubtable opponent as the indispensable invention for the last hundred years. I believe that the other discoveries, creativity or new prototype could be attributed as important as the computers.
On the one hand, the appearing of computers open the new era and the Internet age for human life. Firstly, they contribute many opportunities to access the vast resources including a range of areas such as sciences, medicines,and countless other needed fields. Secondly, people can save some requisite documents, or presentative rather than writing on papers which easily lost and can be damaged the environment. Finally, computers give a host of programs and platforms for users to communicate with other people or unwind after a hardworking day. For example, just a couple of second, people can send and receive email compared to the traditional letters which may take days.
However, human can not assess or admit that what is the best important in our life due to a lot of reason. The main reason is that it depends on personalities. For instance, a person who is nearly the death and have chance to recover by the new medicines, he will recognize that it is essential. Moreover, the last hundred years ago, there were many inventions like mobile phone which now play a fundamental role, lamps which bring light for us at night or cars which help us travel comfortably anywhere, and so on.Hence, our life have many components to constitute a good condition to live which means that nothing is not vital or not crucial enough.
In conclusion, I disagree with the view that computers place the best consequences and benefits in the last hundred years because I believe that the other invention will equally put emphasis on our life.
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- COMPUTER 89
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 72
- Advertising has become an inevitable part of our lives Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief Discuss both views and give your opinion 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computers
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Suggestion: , and
...nge of areas such as sciences, medicines,and countless other needed fields. Secondly...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
... travel comfortably anywhere, and so on.Hence, our life have many components to const...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01365187713 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85601299249 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.673738188 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146364798679 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636148971011 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911990801742 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111426686313 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646066220748 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.