after completion of schooling, the students are want to wok rather than study in college.give overall opinion and support by giving examples.
An increasing concern of many people around the world is that the students are want to start their earnings after the school days, rather than studying at university or higher studies to build their bright future. In my view, it is the wrong decision and this may affect several problems in the future. This essay will discuss both the issue and give an overall opinion.
Getting higher standards of education will lead to a successful journey in their lives. To be more precise higher studies make the student more confident and can be offered by a great job in their future. Most of the studies are planning their career more comfortable .and moving on their long term goals. For example, according to the research study said that student is completing their double degree, this number had grown more from the last few decades.
Whereas, some other pupils are more fascinating about earning amount after completing schooling and not go to colleges. In detail, minor students are not interested in university and also they want to start up their job. This will improve their communication, personal development and somehow awareness of society. For example, most of the students in vocational technology are more attracted to work. But this kind of work may not have any academic standard and no status in surroundings.
To conclude, the minor student is attracted and belive that does work is better than studying and making the best path by getting into university. I mean that both depend on their abilities and capabilities, but more success path is studying at colleges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e planning their career more comfortable .and moving on their long term goals. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, whereas, for example, i mean, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99621212121 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56699713446 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9954645669 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191260783152 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632950657125 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577374096487 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123839078873 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560186022887 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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