IN SOME COUNTRIES AN INCREASING NUMBER OF PEOPLE AER SUFFERING FROM HEALTH PROBLEMS AS A RESULT OF EATING TOO MUCH FAST FOOD. IT IS THEREFORE NECESSARY FOR GOVERNMENT TO IMPOSE TAXE ON THIS KIND OF FOOD. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS OPINION.
In this modern era, people are facing a lot of health problems due to consuming unhygienic food like fast food, which is un protein and bad for health. this food had increased more and more in cities, the government should raise the taxes on that food kind, then it will be controlled. I strongly agree with this statement and give supporting examples.
On one hand, in this modern society people had become robots and they are not given a specific time to their health. in other words, people are more engaging about their career and work, but not concern about the type of food they are taking.
They are choosing fast food because they will take less time to prepare and eat. As per the research of the world health organization, the number of people had climbed up in taking fast food from a few decades onwards.
Secondly, the government should escalate the food prices on that food, it very impotent to do this. If the taxes have hiked on this food, then the quality of food and coast will increase, this leads to a decline in health issues in society. As per the data, the government of India had imposed the oil prices, due to this effect they are more concern about purchasing oil and checking twice and thrice, whether it is good or bad for health. By this kind of change should be happening in society by the government, then only everyone attracts hygienic food.
To conclude, there are so many benefits if the government hike on food materials as I mentioned above. Due to this kind of reasons I strongly support the statement.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...asons I strongly support the statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65579710145 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34187775287 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525362318841 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9361695792 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380116307527 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145090736861 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612015611899 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211014834353 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936128787696 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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