In the age of computers and the internet, is there still a need for public libraries?
Nowadays, not many people frequent the public libraries anymore. The could gain bit of information from the internet. While some think that public libraries have become obsolete. Others are think that it still plays a fundamental role in society. In the essay, I will have a discussions both views and give an opinion.
public libraries are open to everyone. However, some would be still asked for fragment of information through the books.They also give books of many varieties of knowledges. Human beings would be taken their needs from books such as students who are struggling with the thesis,researchers who are doing PhD or Master degrees.While I am in consummate accord with public opinion that public libraries are still reliable way as there is a rightful source for every a bit information that come across.
On the flip side, if you have the connection to the internet,everything would be at your fingerprint. people could get a bit information without stepping a foot outside the house.Everything in internet is not complimentary,easy and affordable acquired. One of which clear it is not every information from the internet is accurate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2688172043 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30728637072 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 77.2496222142 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0909090909 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280790468878 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102340502459 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064146841239 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173984268613 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648699839353 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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