In the age of computers and the internet, is there still a need for public libraries?
Nowadays, not many people frequent the public libraries anymore. The could gain a bit of information from the internet. While, some think that public libraries have become obsolete. Others, could br think that it still plays a fundamental role in society. In the essay, I will have discussions both views and give my opinion.
Public libraries are open to everyone. However, some would be still asked for fragment of information through the books.They also give books of many varieties of knowledges. Human beings would be taken their needs from books such as students who are struggling with the thesis, researchers who are doing PhD or Master degrees. While I am in consummate accord with public opinion that public libraries are still reliable way as there's a rightful source for every a bit information that comes across.
On the flip side, if you have the connection to the internet, everything would be at your fingerprint. People could obtain a bit information without stepping a foot outside the house. Everything in internet is not complimentary,easy and affordable acquired. One of which apparent it is not every information from the internet is accurate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20526315789 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.910026606 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3857715257 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0769230769 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275518442464 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943576217027 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713998627704 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170460402592 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634642889362 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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