Air transport is increasingly used to export fruits and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. Some people say it is a good thing, but other people think it can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided as to whether or not perishable produce should be imported from far away. Whilst some maintain that it is impossible to establish such a challenging mission to transport food long-distance, I opine that it brings considerable benefits.
There are plausible arguments why people do not advocate the idea of food transit in the aviation industry, one of which is the severe damage to the local economy. It is noticeable that when imported goods start to come around frequently, consumers will feel a sense of curiosity especially for products that aren’t quite ubiquitous in the local area. One typical example for this phenomenon is the westernization in Viet Nam around the 90s century, when Western brands began to flocked into the Vietnamese food market with a plethora of choices for customers, therefore causing disequilibrium in sales of imported goods and local products. Another justification for the detrimental impacts of transporting food from far away is the airplane's cost to run them, should food be qualified for abroad delivery, it will go through a myriad of phases of food security ensurement. Furthermore, the need of human resources in operating both food safety and air freight control is immense and costs a fortune for airlines brand, thus it is risky for perishable produces to travel long-distance, the worst case it could severely decline the airline’s revenue.
Notwithstanding some critic’s objections, I tend towards the viewpoint that foods sourced from far away is beneficial for both the importer and exporter. First and foremost, toward the exporter side, it is advantageous to implement an express form of food transit compared to railway and marine methods especially in abroad delivery. To further analyze, aviary transportation can avoid the roadway issue in various areas with dangerous terrain, not to mention modernized aeroplane can deal with extreme weather to ensure the shipping duration. Also, it brings about a plethora of job opportunities in logistics, pilots and both aviary and food expertise. It should also be noted that importing countries that receive unique husbandry will have the chance to experience exotic flavors that are not found in local products, hence it would in turn spur economic growth and encourage consumers spending within the various choices. Knowing the fact that local practice could be overshadowed by an immense foodstuffs coming from overseas, there still are chances that imported stuff could be slashed in price should they be overproduced and become easily found.
In sum, there are sensible reasons to believe that transporting food long-distance in an airplane has drawbacks, my contention is that it is eclipsed by the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Opinions are divided as to whether or not perishable produce should be imported f...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the roadway issue in various areas with dangerous terrain, not to mention modern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2310.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34722222222 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96507447911 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585648148148 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4254174685 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118750147422 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418361907506 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250769350821 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704285718919 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360228541831 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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