Air travel is cheap thesedays allowing ordinary people to travel further. Some peiple say that airfares should be increased because this leads to encironmental problems. Discuss both views and suggest your opinion
In this technological era, it is undoubtedly true that, Owing to the great invention of Airplane people could explore the world easily. However, some Folks on this planet think that airfares should be increased because of this transportation mode and environment is disturbed. But, I disagree with their perception. While, nowadays, fares are cheap and anybody can travel every corner of the world. This essay shall look at both former and latter notion and suggest my opinion.
To begin with, in this 21st century, each and every person can afford air travel because of economy class in plane, which have lowest fare than other classes. This is most essential benefit to the ordinary people to travel country to country for works and studies. This is apparent from a recent article of well reputed newspaper which depicted that, as per the recent record 70% of travellers from middle-class families are using air travel to go abroad for their bright future. These are the benefits of lowest fare of airtravel.
It is undeniable fact that, due to the consumption of fuel in planes, it releases carbon dioxide in the atmosphere which causes global warming. By looking at this aspect people ruminate that charges of ticket should be increased. so travelers ratio will be decreased and save environment. It is possible? No. Aviation is not only source which creates pollution, there are many other sources still available. Moreover, by increasing rates of air ticket, it will directly affect employment and studies of ordinary people who travel to Overseas because they could not afford heavy charge of airticket.
In my opinion, scientists should develop economical engine in upcoming years and decreased a consumption of fuel. But, in this period price of airticket should be cheaper, so everybody can get benefit of this mode of travel. And environment problems cannot be denied, people should use public transportation rather than private vehicles. By this, problem can be resolved.
In conclusion, after pondering over a great deal of thoughts, it can be said that, human beings are the main reason of disturbing environment who directly or indirectly in their falsehood of comfort affecting environment rather that airfares. So, people should stop and prevent environmental problems in lieu of increasing airfares.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to air'
Suggestion: to air
...ntury, each and every person can afford air travel because of economy class in plan...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the lowest'.
Suggestion: have the lowest
...ecause of economy class in plane, which have lowest fare than other classes. This is most e...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the lowest'.
Suggestion: of the lowest
...r bright future. These are the benefits of lowest fare of airtravel. It is undeniable ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... charges of ticket should be increased. so travelers ratio will be decreased and s...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'travelers'' or 'traveler's'?
Suggestion: travelers'; traveler's
...arges of ticket should be increased. so travelers ratio will be decreased and save enviro...
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Line 7, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cles. By this, problem can be resolved. In conclusion, after pondering over a gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, moreover, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26273458445 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72733887393 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587131367292 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.2559991015 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4761904762 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329219730378 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910662812557 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06438744919 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178904768951 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509988878921 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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