A vast majority of people are now using air transportation in order to commute from one place to another.This is probably due to the fact that airline companies have lessened the fare of aeroplane travel.I intend to delve into the pros and cons of such development in the following paragraphs before forming an opinion.
There are numerous benefits of reducing the cost of travelling by airways.First of all, reduction in fare rates would possibly bring all the people throughout the world closer to each other.Thus, it would not be wrong to say that it will enhance the communication between the individuals from the different culture and diverse backgrounds.Ultimately, it further boost up the business or trade among distinct countries.For instance, the investment of foreign companies in developing countries has brought tremendous profits to these nations and it is contributing a lot towards their progress.Hence, declining rates of travelling promote better communication and trade among distinct nations.
On the other hand, it has its downside as well.If airlines continue to decline ticket costs, then more and more passengers will use this mode of transportation, which in turn results in pollution.Since fuel used in the aeroplanes emit harmful gases, which contaminates the air, hence broadens the chances of health related problems, such as asthma and bronchitis, especially among elder people and children.Moreover, the frequency of airports would definitely increase, and thus traffic congestion and noise would make life of residents in those areas unpleasant for a living.Eventually, it will compel citizens to reside under stress and tension.
Henceforth, I, however, believe that the advantages of this step are much more than disadvantages and thus with the help of some effective measures to control congestion on roads and pollution problems, we can harvest the benefits of the low cost of travelling to achieve great heights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46688741722 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35467071739 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649006622517 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.966029473 49.4020404114 372% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 412.75 106.682146367 387% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.5 20.7667163134 364% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.5 7.06120827912 418% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107672686198 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605251209042 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0148427836962 0.0667982634062 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605251209042 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148427836962 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.1 13.0946893788 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 50.2224549098 -26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.63 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.11 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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