For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write. How far do you agree with the suggestion?
There is a magnificent impact of music on developing organism, noticing immediately after hearing music compositions. Moreover, musical instrument practice has a remarkable effect on other developed child domains like reading and writing. I am whole-heartedly believe that however challenging, playing of musical compositions may enhance child skills.
Firstly, musical playing has been developed to improve human mood and to be a peculiar physical train, leading to constant muscle contractions. Having been played, musical sounds improve coordination and concentration, which are necessary for brain structures development. Furthermore, the more regular playing is, the more powerful hand and fingers become. This in itself physical practice, rather than irksome activity. So, it is musical instruments that develop child senses.
On the other side, the musical notation has been recognized by pedagogics as being of high difficulties for a young brain. Performance musical compositions do lead to migraine. If it were not adult supervision, the uncontrolled play would be an exhausting activity for a young person.
Overall, playing on musical instruments is likely lead not only musical but other senses. Indeed, practical skills should be worse developed in childhood, were the instrument not in usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.890625 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15327056156 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5807582356 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177272457856 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698291440732 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036695919175 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11701902647 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00971427989732 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.29 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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