“Nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their career.”
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is an ascending amount of disobedience to rules, happening among offspring. however, one of the dominant reasons for such defiance is an abatement of family ties owing to a stirring work-life of their parents and an outcome of abandonment by the close relatives. Personally, I wholeheartedly accord with the persuasion that however saturated, parents’ career is not a ground for the children’ misbehaviour.
To begin with, an attention grade is not in instant dependence from the hours' quantity, spent on communication. For example, as a child, I would play daily with my mother so productively in an hour, which eventually brought me plenty of gratitude, rather than taking offence. Hence, the child’s disobedience should be considered as the reflection of the domestic atmosphere, as it relates intrinsically to the family’s emotional sphere. Secondly, emphasizing on my point of view, an external bad environment influences enormously on susceptible children. As a consequence, young boys and girls try to imitate worse patterns to impress a company of peers. Without a doubt had parents exhibited behaviour examples in diverse situations, little ones would follow them.
On the contrary, discipline deviation has been recognized by psychologists as a result of being unheard. For instance, the questions about adult life which I discussed with parents were worthwhile to be debated in a tight circle. Thus, discipline disturbances do play a paramount role as a signal of unresolved questions.
To recapitulate, it can be stated that the intensify career building has decreased the amount of time for communication with family members, but kid’s discipline deviation is a result of disturbances of relationships base.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
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Line 6, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
...e is not in instant dependence from the hours quantity, spent on communication. For e...
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Line 16, column 40, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... To recapitulate, it can be stated that the intensify career building has decreased the amoun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63805970149 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44076590538 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2545855439 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241231209459 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735606479719 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651291110476 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143083365993 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469821766894 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.