All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
There is no doubt that obesity is an increasingly phenomenon with societies. Today, both mature people and children are affected by this issue and a lot of people want to change their life and lives healthier. In my country, especially children, in a big city the problem is becoming worse and worse and it is important to take steps to make people avoid. This essay will look at the main cause of the problem and propose some solutions being obesity.
One of the main cause of the problem is that people have an unhealthy lifestyle. Otherwise, after a busy working day, most residents constantly choose fast food as a solution to saving cooking time and having much downtime. It leads to people suffer from some nutritional and health concerns which affect their usual lives. Take New York as an example, employees in that companies always snow under with paperwork so they usually buy pre-prepared food for dinner. To tackle this issue, employees must take a step for their work-life balance which would make a lot of beneficial effects to their health and job performance.
Another problem is that people, especially children, refuse to daily exercise at home. It should come as no surprise that with an increasingly developmental technology, there are various things to attract people than doing exercise such as: watching TV programs or virtual games which make them spending an hour after hour on the computer and TV’s screen. This tends to put a strain on their health as a result, their health are becoming worse and worse. The way forward could be to improve exercise TV programs become more colorful to attract citizen to watch it more regularly, which tend to encourage people to do some exercise in daily basic.
To sum up, obesity is more and more popular in our society due to reasons such as: people’s unhealthy lifestyle and avoid doing exercise. This is a serious problem and unless the living standard of people can get healthier and healthier, the obesity rate will get worse and worse. In my view, government and the people themselves all have a role to play in tackling the problem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('increasingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('phenomenon') instead of another adjective.
There is no doubt that obesity is an increasingly phenomenon with societies. Today, both mature peop...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...g day, most residents constantly choose fast food as a solution to saving cooking ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54803240478 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7611243586 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220421314674 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747392231125 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434341915929 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145273397416 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657079212281 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.