With all the problems in the world today, some people think that spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money can be better spent on other causes. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, the question “whether spending the sums on space exploration is a reasonable decision or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that investigation and research in the galaxy are highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the budget that is spent in scientific objects plays a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express why I support this issue. First and foremost is that the majority of real mysterious will be unfolded for us. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that by investing a huge amount of money in this field the scientists will be able to survey the existence of life on other planets. A group of scientists, working at prestigious university conducted that the Earth has been saved frequently by several hazard events, like the hit of a meteorite.
However, there is no doubt that spending a large amount of money for space exploration provides various negative points. It should be taken into account that it would be better to spend money for numerous developing countries, such as Africa and Syria that are suffering from famine and starvation. Moreover, some people think that the government should consider the huge amount of money for raising the living standard of poor countries and invest the sums to get a house and to provide employment.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that to promote our information in science and space exploration an informed decision must be taken into consideration. However, every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nable decision or not?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Suggestion:
... are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0396039604 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92704854708 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9410962608 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24188704483 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715126331743 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054704787227 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121962774231 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567725675724 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.