Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The development of high-speed internet and electronic devices has attracted increasing number of users to read news online. However, it may be held that newspapers will remain the primary media for getting news. I disagree with this point. I believe that in the future newspaper will lose its leading position due to its disadvantages and limitations.
Firstly, compared with mobile devices, newspapers cannot help us get latest information. this results from its quiet long cycle of news production. Generally, it is time-consuming to collect information, edit news, design layout and circulate newspaper. when readers get newspaper, events reported may take place one day ago. Therefore, people would rather browse internet on their cell phones. various websites and applications can provide latest information, which probably came out just a few minutes ago.
Secondly, newspaper depends on words and pictures to convey information. one disadvantage for this is that some vital details are likely to be omitted, which may decline the comprehensiveness of news report. Also, in comparison with videos appearing in internet, the form of words and pictures cannot depict news events vividly and accurately. Misuse of some words and particular selection of pictures can even misdirect readers.
Furthermore, newspapers tend not to present various perspectives and voices. Different from internet, where everyone can post a message timely and freely, newspaper is supported by limited sources of news. Thus, some unique and distinctive ideas may not be found in newspaper. Especially when a publisher possesses its own standpoint, selective reporting and biased report tends to take place.
To conclude, it is believed that newspaper will lose its leading position of news report. due to insufficient perspectives, delayed news and inaccurate reporting, it is likely to be replaced by some new media based on internet.
- Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future?. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76450511945 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01928014666 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1020188303 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.45 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20546750789 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627713319818 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521344249806 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126340828995 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506135311098 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.