Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is tangible that e-news has been found as an indispensable feature in the modern era of technology. While some people believe that neither online news nor alternative news can superseded conventional newspaper, I reject to this notion, claiming that printed media is no longer the most integral ways to update news.
Newspaper, without doubt, have certain drawbacks to individuals and the society as a whole. In terms of individuals, readers who subscribe to a magazine and take the position that merely printing paper can enable them to see a big picture of the world often become obsolete. Due to its complication ; for example ; adjusting front, size and style characters, newspapers released to the public are unable to provide up to the minutes news coverage of the events as they happen. Secondly, newsprint put the environment at jeopardy. In order to meet people’s demand for the printed media, journalism companies have to cut down trees to product enough papers for printing, which, apparently, leads to natural degradation.
On the other hand, recent advances in technology are making a great contribution to news coverage when introducing e-news to the public. This usually convey the firsthand information although some news can be fabricated since the Internet does not have the editorial policy, which determines whether serious news items are reported in a responsible way. Thanks to the Internet-based media, articles are hardly became a source of stale news. Furthermore, online news inflict less damage on the ecosystems than the printing counterparts did. If the large number of people get acquainted with reading leading articles on the Internet, the society will experience a falling circulation in newsprint, leading to a sustainable levels of the use of natural resources.
Taking into those above-mentioned characteristics, one can conclude that people should use the Internet to access news in lieu of the traditional ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'minutes'' or 'minute's'?
Suggestion: minutes'; minute's
... public are unable to provide up to the minutes news coverage of the events as they hap...
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Line 9, column 333, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a responsible way" with adverb for "responsible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...whether serious news items are reported in a responsible way. Thanks to the Internet-based media, ar...
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Line 9, column 411, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ternet-based media, articles are hardly became a source of stale news. Furthermore, on...
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Line 9, column 722, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'level'?
Suggestion: level
... in newsprint, leading to a sustainable levels of the use of natural resources. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04688476379 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3308065211 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.153846154 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251441464734 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804719044669 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588285218244 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14821145667 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744551602508 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.