An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Somepeople think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future thanto the present. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some
people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than
to the present. Do you agree or disagree?

I certainly support the view. One should most definitely keep the future in mind and
not fritter away everything to enjoy the present. One should always remember that
the present would one day transform into the future, and when it eventually does, it
should be safe and secure. The same holds true for societies. Let us consider why it
is so important to be prepared for the coming time.

The mortality rate has come down and the span of life is generally longer, but the
period of earning is comparatively limited. Nobody knows how long he would live,
but the age of retirement is generally fixed. One cannot work indefinitely. Therefore,
during his earning span, he has to make sure that he puts aside enough money that
will hold him in good stead in his later years, when he will be able to work no more.
Further, the requirements in old age are sometimes more than a person's needs during
the period of his youth. Deteriorating health translates into higher medical bills and
hospital charges. Being weak and infirm, one needs to spend more on commuting.
He will need to hire assistants to help in the house.

Next comes the needs of the family. One has to provide for the education and
marriage expenses of the dependent members of the family, like children and even
grandchildren. One has to pay one's insurance premiums, and even for the day-to-
day needs of the younger members of the family, till such time as they are employed
and earning. Moreover, one may incur extra expenditure on leisure activities. People
generally travel more after retirement to meet their relatives and friends who may be
settled and staying far away from them. There would also be the usual expenses on
house maintenance and repair, and the payment of personal and property taxes.
The societies should also think about tomorrow. Neighbourhoods should be planned
nicely. Everyone should participate in community projects. Good educational
institutes and health centres should be there in all areas. If only today is looked into
and no planning is done for tomorrow then crime and violence would increase in
society and everyone would suffer.

Therefore, it is imperative that people and societies plan wisely for the future. If one
has saved enough, one can sit back and enjoy peace and comfort in ones later years
and even witness the smile of joy on the faces of ones children. If he has saved not,
then the journey ahead would be dreary and dismal indeed.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 33, column 51, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...itness the smile of joy on the faces of ones children. If he has saved not, then th...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96437054632 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53237398587 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565320665083 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7054680679 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4074074074 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5925925926 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2962962963 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.38176352705 707% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0825601223444 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262777943276 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411154682469 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0233803442185 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336125067125 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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