The way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected the types of relationship that people make? Has this been positive or negative developments?
The way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected the types of relationship that people make? Has this been positive or negative developments?
Nowadays, with the development of technology, we have changed the way of interaction with each other. From my perspective, this trend is the pros and cons, which has been caused by several factors.
On the one hand, the option to use technology is attractive because of some undeniable advantage. Firstly, we can chit and chat with all people around the world, regardless of far-off distance with the assistance of laptop and social network. In the past, we had to go to the post office with a view to sending a letter but now a lot of message and emails can be sent at home thank to the internet. Secondly, the way we shop is different from we did in the past. With a click of the mouse, we can purchase a variety of goods with reasonable price without going to market.
On the other hand, technology is disadvantageous to some extent. The main shortcoming is that technology separates us from the real world. Many teenagers idle away the hours by surfing the net, indulge themselves in games and pay no attention to people around them. They tend to prefer chatting online to making a face-to-face conservation. Another drawback is that due to the proliferation of technology, labor-saving machines are used to replace workers, resulting in an increase in unemployment rate. As a consequence, many people engage in criminal activities as a way of making a living, thus climbing the crime rate.
In conclusion, technology has a great influence on our lives in various aspects, however, whether it is good or bad depends on the way we use it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun message seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of messages'.
Suggestion: a lot of messages
...with a view to sending a letter but now a lot of message and emails can be sent at home thank to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83666666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93153543386 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576666666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1107498099 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3529411765 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48445157889 0.244688304435 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160567333207 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185210933197 0.0667982634062 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33307966068 0.151304729494 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.342595431226 0.056905535591 602% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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