The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having a impact on live sport events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?
Recently, the number for sports program on the televison has risen weekly. This might have the benefits for any sports games which conduct in live events. In my opinion, there will be more the positive thought through the rocketed quantity that sports shown rather than the drawbacks of them.
Since the television started to show the sports program, there will be more people easily watch their favourite sports and enjoy it. The greater amount of people who see this event has the huge impact to the profits of the media company. This is the main reason why every television stations wants to provide this segment in the peak hours. On the other hands, this also has the benefits to the supporters that they do not need to spend more money to attend the international event overseas which cost a lot, like cost for making visas, plane tickets, living cost and hotel reservations.
However, there is a drawbacks for broadcasting the sports on TV, because of the less people who wants come to the stadion and watch directly, there enhance the small amount of financial feedback to the sponsor clubs. This would be affect to the budget for each athlete training and salaries. In addition, as the decrease numbers of fan also loosen the mental and emotionally support to the players.
To conclude, the effect of widen publications in television undoubtedly have the impact to the live sports event. Moreover, I strongly believe it has more pros than the cons for the sports ceremony and each individuals, like supporters and players.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93461538462 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45521724415 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6114624435 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.916666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400120050959 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139562030187 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093426986739 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242348549747 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100009508357 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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