The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changes of the population aged 65 and over. This graph provides the data from 1940 to 2040 in three different countries, such as USA, Sweden, and Japan. Overall the movement of this population was increased.
In 1940, USA is the biggest proportion of ages it started almost 10 percent of them, however, Sweden and Japan were much different and lower amounted of USA. Throughout 20 years, USA and Sweden population were increased slightly, meanwhile, Japan was dropped to below 5 percent of 65 and overpopulation. In 1980 to 2000, Japan ages society remained steadily and sharply went up to 5 percent. On the other hand, USA and Sweden populated were deducted to lower than 15 percent.
After 2000, Japan older community rocketed until it reached a peak of more than 25 percent for Japan and for Sweden fluctuated a bit and gain maximum population in 25 percent. USA is the least populated people aged 65 and over, they reach 22.5 percent in 2040.
In summary, three of those following countries are increases on 2040, but the biggest is Japan. In the future, Japan will have a lot of older people because they feel safe to live in Jap
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81773399015 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55587656887 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1162036389 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9090909091 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186704720419 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090020855671 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750509427719 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127879625617 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862617102449 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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