Recently, the number for sports program on the televison has risen weekly. This might have the benefits for any sports games which conduct in live events. In my opinion, there will be more the positive thought through the rocketed quantity that sports shown rather than the drawbacks of them.
Since the television started to show the sports program, there will be more people easily watch their favourite sports and enjoy it. The greater amount of people who see this event has the huge impact to the profits of the media company. On the other hands, this also has the benefits to the supporters that they do not need to spend more money to attend the international event overseas which cost much money like cost for making visas, plane tickets, living cost and hotel reservations.
However, there is a drawbacks for broadcasting the sports on TV, because of the less people who wants come to the stadion and watch directly, there enhance the small amount of financial feedback to the sponsor clubs. This would be affect to the budget for each athlete training and salaries. Moreover, supporters choose to go out and watch the game elsewhere due to socialize with the others, yet by staying at home will mean missing this chance to be acquanited along fans.
To conclude, the effect of widen publications in television undoubtedly have the impact to the live sports event. Moreover, I strongly believe it has more pros than the cons for the sports ceremony and each individuals, like supporters and players.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44668491838 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6146719449 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364211406419 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141753508244 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955382047021 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232927569515 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970519058343 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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