The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities in land and sea. What are the reasons and solutions.
Nowadays, there are various ways in which some animal species both on land and sea are decreasing in population. This can be traced to human activities in recent years. This essay will give causes for this action and will also provide a solution.
In recent years, research has shown that many land and sea creatures are declining in polplatin by the way people harvest them. These can be drawn from market or individual reason. Most people hunt for the purpose of financial growth like the hunters hunt for wild animals to be sold in the market either for consumption or for the manufacturing of bags, shoes and example of this is the hunting of crocodiles. Thses activity tend to reduce various species of animals for that particular reason. In addition to these, may people hunt these animals for the purpose of having fun or for recreational activities. In some cultures, they tend to discover a man's strength from the way he hunt for wild animals an example of this can be traced to South Sudan where lions are being hunted by men to prove their strength.
On the other hand, there should be a limited number if hunts to be made for a particular period of time so that these animals can reproduce to prevent them becoming extinct. Government has a large role to play in all of these. They should enact laws that prohibits hunting a particular animals or in a particular area of land or sea. They should allocate fines to anyone who doesn't have license to hunt animals. Majority of people who practice bush burning in order to build site in certain places should be discouraged form practicing these acts. This is one of the cuase of the death of most animals because thier natural habitat is destroyed, some of them get burnt in the process of hiding, some of them are burried under ground. This accounts for a major loss of most animal species.
In conclusion, individuals and government has a long way to prevent these species from falling in population if the laws guilding such acts are regulated
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 3, column 683, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'hunts'.
Suggestion: hunts
...iscover a mans strength from the way he hunt for wild animals an example of this can...
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Line 6, column 90, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...er if hunts to be made for a particular period of time so that these animals can reproduce to ...
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Line 6, column 287, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'animal'?
Suggestion: animal
...aws that prohibits hunting a particular animals or in a particular area of land or sea....
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hey should allocate fines to anyone who doesnt have license to hunt animals. Majority ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71388101983 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48367782826 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518413597734 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2075340465 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168429180414 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657685285213 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067110111349 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104432970324 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045412218206 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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